Exposition
On an old farm in South West Iowa.There lived a family of four.The dad who was 40, mom who was 37, sister who was 15 and the son who was 18.The son was named Jack. He lived on the farm all his life. His dad expects a lot out of him.His dad and him got along for the most part.
Complication
It was the middle of December and Jack had been waiting all year to go hunting second season for deer.His dad had been sick for the last two weeks and it was up to jack to get all the chores done and the fieldwork done. Jack pretty much decided that he would have not even one moment to go hunting.
Rising Action
Jack and his friend scot thought that if they got all their work done fast that they could end up getting done really early.For the past 3 weeks as jack would make corn stalks he saw the massive 14-point buck.So they decide to try there first. It was about 3:30 and jack snuck out of the house with out tell his dad were he was going. His dad was feeling a lot better, and decided to going out of the house for a drive to see what his son had been doing for the last two weeks.
Climax
Jack and his buddy Scott had already hunkered down to their spot. Jack was right next to the big old oak tree, and Scott was 100 yards away from jack. Jack couldn’t see Scott but Scott had a plan view of jack.There were dress perfect for the day jack and Scott had cameo pants gloves and a cam coat with black and green face paint. They didn’t know why but they put it on. It was about mid morning and the temp was only 15 degrees and the wind was out of the south blowing about 5 mph. It was a perfect day to take down a big old buck.Mean while jacks dad drives up to the field.Brad was his name.He had on brown coveralls and a brown carhart. As he walked threw the thick brush approaching Jack, Scott could see the whole thing right if front of his eyes.Brad was having problems going threw the brush and kept on tripping over the sticks. Jack couldn’t see very clearly threw the brush but he could hear just fine. He new something was out there. He thought to him self it could be the big buck that he has been waiting for all year. His hart started pumping a million bpm it seemed.He picked up his gun and aimed it at the direction were the noise was coming from.Scott saw jack aiming right at his dad, and a flash of light and smoke he saw Brad drop to the ground.
Falling Action
While jack had just started noticing what he had done threw the smoke from the muzzleloader.Scott ran to brad as fast as he could, then kneeling down right beside him. He could see the puddle of blood underneath him. Jack saw right were the slug had traveled from Brads right side straight threw the rib cage and out his left side.Jack and Scott thought that Brad would be died in a couple of minutes. Brad knew that he wasn’t going to make it. He told his son and his son’s best friend to not to bother taking him to the hospital and let him lay down and rest.
Dénouement
Brad explained that it was Jacks fault. He said he was in the wrong place at the wrong time. He told jack that he loved him and the whole family.He tried to lighten the moment and he told jack that he hope he bagged that big buck. As jacks dad closes his eyes and falls in an every lasting sleep.That winter Jack got his big buck in the same place as he shot his dad.Jack and Scott spent a whole day chopping through the rock hard dirt. They barred him under the oak tree right beside the house.
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Joe Schmitt
sonnet
I wake up at the first sign of the light
I grab my snow boots and my coveralls
They feel so warm and are a stunning sight
Beyond the window, snow flakes start to fall
I awoke my dog for the day outside
He hoped in the truck already to go
As we drove I saw many deer hide
I had to show the dog were to go
I made the dog pounce around the thick brush
I was about to give up and go home
But the dog stop and my heart start to rush I looked at the dog he was straight and tone
I told the dog to go sick him up now
I picked up my shot-gun and brought him down
Experience poem
It happen last summer
I bought some new boxing gloves
I decided to try them out
My brother was willing
We put them on
And before I new it he came out swinging
I told him he needed to slow down
And he didn’t so I got ready to knock him down
He got me with a upper cut
Now I was made
Like a rampaging bull I hit with almost all I had
Like a grown man stepping on sticks
I heard his ribs crack
He droped down to the grown
At first I was glad because I had won
And then sadness rushed over me
Like atsumi
I walked into the woods
I heard a sudden crack
Just like the breaking of a stick
I saw a bear t’was black.
He did not see me there
As I stood in the way
He was to busy to notice
He jump up and down at play
Whosever room this is should be ashamed!
His work boots are kicked by the door.
Hismoney is lying on top of his dresser,
And his blue prints all unfolded out on the floor.
His dirty clothes piled up in his bathroom,
His fishing pole pushed against the corner of the wall,
His clean close laying right next to his bed,
His book bag half way in the hall.
And his work clothes on the other side.
The hole in his wall where he hit his head.
His paintball gun up in his closet
Where most of his other junk goes.
His hunting stuff that he puts in his basket
Whosever room this is should be ashamed!
Well I have something to say
The guys room I have been talking about
Is mine.
Like a brick wall
When u push him he doesn’t move
When u hit him he chips
Your afraid to run into him straight on
He shows no emotion
What I want is
a dirt bike
To have freedom
To drive in the timber
during a cool morning
To ramp the biggest
ramp at the track
Jump 1 Jump 2
Warm-up #12
It was about midnight the moon lighted up the sky. It was chilly outside but it didn't matter because i had the heater on in my truck. I was on a gravel road drive as fast as my truck would let me go. I was very late to my house and i had many messages from my mom saying get home. As i came up to every turn i would let of the gas, tap the brakes and then while i was in mid turn i would smash the gas, kick the truck sideways and straighten it out. It was a blast, and i didn't even get grounded.
On an old farm in South West Iowa. There lived a family of four. The dad who was 40, mom who was 37, sister who was 15 and the son who was 18. The son was named Jack. He lived on the farm all his life. His dad expects a lot out of him. His dad and him got along for the most part.
Complication
It was the middle of December and Jack had been waiting all year to go hunting second season for deer. His dad had been sick for the last two weeks and it was up to jack to get all the chores done and the fieldwork done. Jack pretty much decided that he would have not even one moment to go hunting.
Rising Action
Jack and his friend scot thought that if they got all their work done fast that they could end up getting done really early. For the past 3 weeks as jack would make corn stalks he saw the massive 14-point buck. So they decide to try there first. It was about 3:30 and jack snuck out of the house with out tell his dad were he was going. His dad was feeling a lot better, and decided to going out of the house for a drive to see what his son had been doing for the last two weeks.
Climax
Jack and his buddy Scott had already hunkered down to their spot. Jack was right next to the big old oak tree, and Scott was 100 yards away from jack. Jack couldn’t see Scott but Scott had a plan view of jack. There were dress perfect for the day jack and Scott had cameo pants gloves and a cam coat with black and green face paint. They didn’t know why but they put it on. It was about mid morning and the temp was only 15 degrees and the wind was out of the south blowing about 5 mph. It was a perfect day to take down a big old buck. Mean while jacks dad drives up to the field. Brad was his name. He had on brown coveralls and a brown carhart. As he walked threw the thick brush approaching Jack, Scott could see the whole thing right if front of his eyes. Brad was having problems going threw the brush and kept on tripping over the sticks. Jack couldn’t see very clearly threw the brush but he could hear just fine. He new something was out there. He thought to him self it could be the big buck that he has been waiting for all year. His hart started pumping a million bpm it seemed. He picked up his gun and aimed it at the direction were the noise was coming from. Scott saw jack aiming right at his dad, and a flash of light and smoke he saw Brad drop to the ground.
Falling Action
While jack had just started noticing what he had done threw the smoke from the muzzleloader. Scott ran to brad as fast as he could, then kneeling down right beside him. He could see the puddle of blood underneath him. Jack saw right were the slug had traveled from Brads right side straight threw the rib cage and out his left side. Jack and Scott thought that Brad would be died in a couple of minutes. Brad knew that he wasn’t going to make it. He told his son and his son’s best friend to not to bother taking him to the hospital and let him lay down and rest.
Dénouement
Brad explained that it was Jacks fault. He said he was in the wrong place at the wrong time. He told jack that he loved him and the whole family. He tried to lighten the moment and he told jack that he hope he bagged that big buck. As jacks dad closes his eyes and falls in an every lasting sleep. That winter Jack got his big buck in the same place as he shot his dad. Jack and Scott spent a whole day chopping through the rock hard dirt. They barred him under the oak tree right beside the house.
_
Joe Schmitt
sonnet
I wake up at the first sign of the light
I grab my snow boots and my coveralls
They feel so warm and are a stunning sight
Beyond the window, snow flakes start to fall
I awoke my dog for the day outside
He hoped in the truck already to go
As we drove I saw many deer hide
I had to show the dog were to go
I made the dog pounce around the thick brush
I was about to give up and go home
But the dog stop and my heart start to rush
I looked at the dog he was straight and tone
I told the dog to go sick him up now
I picked up my shot-gun and brought him down
Experience poem
It happen last summer
I bought some new boxing gloves
I decided to try them out
My brother was willing
We put them on
And before I new it he came out swinging
I told him he needed to slow down
And he didn’t so I got ready to knock him down
He got me with a upper cut
Now I was made
Like a rampaging bull I hit with almost all I had
Like a grown man stepping on sticks
I heard his ribs crack
He droped down to the grown
At first I was glad because I had won
And then sadness rushed over me
Like a tsumi
I walked into the woods
I heard a sudden crack
Just like the breaking of a stick
I saw a bear t’was black.
He did not see me there
As I stood in the way
He was to busy to notice
He jump up and down at play
Whosever room this is should be ashamed!
His work boots are kicked by the door.
His money is lying on top of his dresser,
And his blue prints all unfolded out on the floor.
His dirty clothes piled up in his bathroom,
His fishing pole pushed against the corner of the wall,
His clean close laying right next to his bed,
His book bag half way in the hall.
And his work clothes on the other side.
The hole in his wall where he hit his head.
His paintball gun up in his closet
Where most of his other junk goes.
His hunting stuff that he puts in his basket
Whosever room this is should be ashamed!
Well I have something to say
The guys room I have been talking about
Is mine.
Like a brick wall
When u push him he doesn’t move
When u hit him he chips
Your afraid to run into him straight on
He shows no emotion
What I want is
a dirt bike
To have freedom
To drive in the timber
during a cool morning
To ramp the biggest
ramp at the track
Jump 1 Jump 2